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Hi Ollie, I like that you draw the picture draw the picture of yourself. I think that is a creative way to show your about me. I also drew me instead of just taking a photo. I also like how you wrote a good amount of writing for what your paragraphs. The only thing I think you could work on is to draw the whole picture of you.(not including your background) From Larz :D
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Hi Ollie,
ReplyDeleteI like that you draw the picture draw the picture of yourself. I think that is a creative way to show your about me. I also drew me instead of just taking a photo. I also like how you wrote a good amount of writing for what your paragraphs. The only thing I think you could work on is to draw the whole picture of you.(not including your background)
From Larz :D