Friday, 8 June 2018

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My name is Ollie. I live with my sister  and my parents. I grew up in Gisborne. 

I have a pet called Lulu and she is a cat. 
I am good at rugby. I enjoy writing.My challenges are to finish my work.


My goals are for this year are to do better with my homework that the teachers give me.
I'm am looking forward to finishing all my maths this year.
My friends inspire me to finish my maths

4 comments:

  1. Hello Ollie this is a grate profile but you could put a few more things on there is a lot of information. What other sports do you like.

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  2. Hi Oliver
    I like your writing it is good.
    I like what you did about your math's you do need to do your math,s
    By Amelia.

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  3. Kia ora, I am Asher from Riverdale School.
    I really like that you play rugby and i like your pets name also i like to play rugby and i got a cat like you and i got a dog.
    I learnt that you like rugby aand that you like cats also i like cats as well
    Maybe you could tell us more about you and your family also have you got eny brothers and sisters
    If you would like to see my learning visit my blog <a href="https://”riverdalegisasherk.blogspot.com/”>here</a>

    Mā te wā
    Asher

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  4. thanks for the comment asher.Do you like to play rugby.also I have a sister and I am getting a German Sheppard dad is a police officer and he is over in png at the moment.and my mum is a travel agent.what is your cats name and your dogs name.I play rugby for nagtapa and I play for my school.I am going to face cobham school for a game.what are your pets names

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